i like animen i watch it when im bored and i like wolfs and to hang out and talk
"I like anime, I watch it when I’m bored. I also like wolves and I like hanging out and talking."
For those of you who do not speak weeaboo, that’s your translation. ONTO
MY REAL CRITIQUE~
This is one sentence! Is it really all that hard to type up a paragraph or two? Honestly, I like copy and pasted bio’s better than this living piece of crap!
Because nobody seems to understand this, I’m going to spell it out for you.
1.) You make crappy bio, no good RP’ers want to RP with you.
2.) You start to RP like shit, then no one wants to RP with you.
3.) You end up on a bad RP blog and you get butthurt about it.
4.) Because you’re butthurt, you delete your account.
5.) Because you deleted your account you have no idea what you’re missing, and therefore are missing out on a lot of fun.
Don’t delete your account, make a good bio instead.
Because this is so short, I’m going to give you a little critique on the entire profile.
This is a Haruhi, she went to Ouran and now she works there. That is understandable, I have seen that headcannon many times and I somewhat approve of it. But, the birthday clearly says that you were born in 97, that means that this Haruhi is only 14. A freshman in highschool, if in highschool at all.
Next, this profile picture is of a blond girl with long curly-ish hair. This is a Haruhi account, so it should reason out to have a Haruhi picture, correct?
And finally, you’re from Denver and you live there now.
You work at Ouran.
You are a Haruhi account.
I wouldn’t have a problem with this being an AU account in which Haruhi is an American transfer student, I have seen that done successfully before, but this is pretty much a disaster. It could be worse, but there are so many contradicting facts and inaccuracies here that this entire account pushes me farther out of this fandom.
TO RECAP, OR JUST RESTATE THE REVIEW IF YOU DIDN’T WANT TO READ IT!
- Make your bio longer, it tells how you’ll RP and just what is up with the character.
- Change your pic. This is a Haruhi account, find a Haruhi pic.
- Fix your age, pic, and location info. Your age should be old enough to be a teacher, you should not live in Denver, and I already covered the pic.